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<nounwrap>Mana: You'll take care of Ai-chan?  | <nounwrap>Title: What a mess! Ai-chan goes to school!!  | ||
Mana: You'll take care of Ai-chan?  | |||
Cheryl: Yeah, we'll take good care of her!  | Cheryl: Yeah, we'll take good care of her!  | ||
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Mana: Well that's settled, then.  | Mana: Well that's settled, then.  | ||
Sign: Student Council Room  | |||
Rikka: Noone should come in here until after school.  | Rikka: Noone should come in here until after school.  | ||
Mana and I will come by to check on her from time to time during school.{Yeah, bunting on this line. --K}  | |||
Please take care of her today, you three.  | |||
Cheryl: She's in good hands.  | |||
Rikka: I've gotta go. I'm counting on you!  | |||
{Cheryl just says "Cheryl" here, skipping that.}  | |||
Raquel: You got it!  | |||
Ai-chan!  | |||
Lance: We're going to be your papa...  | |||
Cheryl: and mama for a little bit today. {Moved the "for a little bit today" to the end of Cheryl's bit to make it flow better. --K}  | |||
Ai-chan: Kewpie!  | |||
Cheryl: She really is so cute!  | |||
Lance: Let's play upsy-daisy.  | |||
Ai-chan: Kewpie!  | |||
Raquel: Such charming bonding.  | |||
Lance: Ai-chan, stop....  | |||
Cheryl: You can endure that much.  | |||
Lance: Ai-chan, wait!  | |||
Ai-chan: Ai!  | |||
Raquel: Lance!  | |||
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!  | |||
Raquel: Help me!  | |||
Cheryl: Ai-chan...  | |||
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!  | |||
Sign: Student Council Room {It jumps around *alot* here, may not be worth it to have the typesetting follow it. --Kanmuri}  | |||
Mana: How's Ai-chan doing?  | |||
Good, she seems fine.  | |||
Rikka: What happened here?  | |||
Cheryl: Nothing wrong here. We were just happily playing with Ai-chan.  | |||
Mana: What kind of playing got the room this messy?  | |||
Rikka: You weren't, perchance, being played with?  | |||
Isn't it time for her milk?  | |||
Mana: Cheryl, if you please?  | |||
Cheryl: Sure!  | |||
Cheryl-meryl!  | |||
Mana: Huh? What's wrong?  | |||
Rikka!  | |||
Rikka: Huh? Umm... Lemme think, there's many reasons why she wouldn't want to drink her milk...  | |||
Sorry! I don't know.  | |||
Mana: No way!  | |||
Ai-chan...  | |||
{\i1}Please, don't cry...  | |||
What's this?  | |||
Raquel: A new Cure Lovie's appeared.  | |||
Let's try it out.  | |||
Raquel: Yo! Raquel-roll! {ヨー! チェケラケ! Tried to come up with an an amusing play on Raquel's name that sort of matched the Japanese one --K}  | |||
Rikka: It's night in here now.  | |||
Ai-chan: Ai!  | |||
Mana: Why did that Cure Lovie appear?  | |||
Rikka: Perhaps it materialized in response to Mana's feelings?  | |||
Raquel: Exactly!  | |||
Cure Lovies are created from the love nurtured in your heart.  | |||
Lance: ...is what Davi said.  | |||
Rikka: Geez Raquel, you should tell us important stuff like this right away.  | |||
Mana: Ah, we've gotta go.  | |||
We're counting on your continued help with Ai-chan.  | |||
Cheryl: Leave it to us.  | |||
Raquel: When she's quiet like this, she really does look like an angel.  | |||
Cheryl: We should just let her keep sleeping like this.  | |||
Lance: Someone's coming.  | |||
Cheryl: What are you doing? You're gonna wake up Ai-chan!  | |||
Ai-chan: Ai!  | |||
Cheryl: Ai-chan, shh!  | |||
Lance: Someone really is coming now.  | |||
Male Student: Is someone in here?  | |||
Ai-chan: Ai!  | |||
Cheryl: Quiet!  | |||
Ai-chan: Ai!  | |||
Cheryl: You can't just run off on your own!  | |||
Lance: Rikka, you liar. You said no one would come.  | |||
Raquel: You've got no room to talk, Lance.  | |||
Ai-chan: Kewpie!  | |||
Cheryl: Ah! She's heading inside!  | |||
Sign: Art Room  | |||
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!  | |||
Male Student: Hey, don't just change the pose all of a sudden!  | |||
Why? Why is it chasing me?!  | |||
Stop! Stop!  | |||
Ai-chan: Yay!  | |||
Teacher: And therefore...  | |||
PE Teacher: Okay, today's class is over now.  | |||
Male Students: Right.  | |||
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!  | |||
PE Teacher: Hey, I said class is over!  | |||
Ai-chan: Ai! Ai!  | |||
Ai!  | |||
Cheryl: Ai-chan, wait!  | |||
Ai-chan: Kewpie!  | |||
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Revision as of 21:19, 2 April 2013
Translation: Kanmuri
TL in progress
Translation
Prologue
Mana: It's a beautiful morning.
Rikka: "Suddenly -- とつぜんに" {Yes, she's studying Japanese<-->English flashcards. The Hiragana there is intentional. Romaji: "totsuzen ni" --K}
"Quickly -- 素早く" {Could we put furigana on this one? すばや goes over the 素早. Romaji: "subayaku" --K}
Mana: Hmm? Whatcha doin'?
Rikka: My daily reviews.
We've been really busy lately, right?
We've also got Student Council work to do at school, so I'm squeezing in some studying in where I can.
Mana: Ah, that's why you're the top student at our school!
Joe: A sharp mind makes a woman even more beautiful.
I'm sure you'll grow into a lovely lady.
Rikka: {デレデレ}Oh please stop, you tease!
Mana + Rikka: Oh, hey mister!
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
Mana: Good morning, Ai-chan!
Joe: I'm glad I found you two.
Here's your mama!
Mana: Ai-chan!
Joe: That's a relief.
Truth is I was just informed that some fancy jewelry once worn by a princess from the Heian period has been found.
I'm off to purchase it, so I'll leave Ai-chan in your care.
Rikka: W-Wait a minute, here!
Mana: We can't do that! We're heading to school now.
Joe: But I don't have anyone else I can leave her with.
And she's so happy when she's with her mama, too.
Ai-chan: Ai!
Rikka + Mana: Ahh... So cute!
Joe: I'm off!
Mana: Wai-!
Rikka: We've been had...
Mana: Now what do we do?
Cheryl: Hello, you two?
Raquel: Aren't you forgetting about someone?
{OP}
Part 1
Title: What a mess! Ai-chan goes to school!!
Mana: You'll take care of Ai-chan?
Cheryl: Yeah, we'll take good care of her!
Rikka: Are you sure you can handle that?
Raquel: What's that reaction for?
Cheryl: Do you think we're unreliable?
Mana: No, not really...
Cheryl: Let's call Lance over too, then.
Alice: Hello?
Rikka: You guys can make phone calls too?
Raquel: Yeah, Davi showed us how.
Alice: Well, that is a predicament.
Lance: Is it okay for me to go, then?
Alice: But of course!
Lance: I flew over right away!
Raquel: Now we're ready! {これでバッチリ!}
Cheryl: You can count on Cheryl!
Mana: Okay, your passion is proof you're serious!
Cheryl + Raquel + Lance: Yay!
Baseball Captain: There she is!
Soccer Captain: Student Council President!
Baseball Captain: Please hear me out, the Soccer team's being unreasonable.
Soccer Captain: No, the Baseball team's at fault here.
Baseball Captain: Huh? Stop lying!
Soccer Captain: Who's lying?!
Both Captains: What's that? You wanna fight?!
Mana: Stop!
Sportsmen should shake hands before a match.
Now, tell me why you two are fighting.
Baseball Captian: The truth is...
Rikka: Let's take this chance to head to the Student Council Room.
Mana: In short, you two are fighting over who gets to use the field for morning practice, right? {グラウンド is Engrish xD --K}
Both Captains: Yeah...
{Begin description of schedule closeup for typsetting}
Top: Baseball team field use schedule
Top Row: (Days of the Week) Sun Mon Tue Wed Thur Fri Sat {Adjust abbreviations as necessary to fit --K}
Left side (top): Morn. {Abbreviation of morning, adjust as necessary. --K}
Left side (bottom): After School {Not sure how to abbreviate this, may need to write it vertically. --K}
{End schedule closeup}
Mana: How about following this daily alternating schedule from now on?
Soccer Captain: I guess...
Baseball Captain: That'll work...
Mana: Well that's settled, then.
Sign: Student Council Room
Rikka: Noone should come in here until after school.
Mana and I will come by to check on her from time to time during school.{Yeah, bunting on this line. --K}
Please take care of her today, you three.
Cheryl: She's in good hands.
Rikka: I've gotta go. I'm counting on you!
{Cheryl just says "Cheryl" here, skipping that.}
Raquel: You got it!
Ai-chan!
Lance: We're going to be your papa...
Cheryl: and mama for a little bit today. {Moved the "for a little bit today" to the end of Cheryl's bit to make it flow better. --K}
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
Cheryl: She really is so cute!
Lance: Let's play upsy-daisy.
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
Raquel: Such charming bonding.
Lance: Ai-chan, stop....
Cheryl: You can endure that much.
Lance: Ai-chan, wait!
Ai-chan: Ai!
Raquel: Lance!
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!
Raquel: Help me!
Cheryl: Ai-chan...
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!
Sign: Student Council Room {It jumps around *alot* here, may not be worth it to have the typesetting follow it. --Kanmuri}
Mana: How's Ai-chan doing?
Good, she seems fine.
Rikka: What happened here?
Cheryl: Nothing wrong here. We were just happily playing with Ai-chan.
Mana: What kind of playing got the room this messy?
Rikka: You weren't, perchance, being played with?
Isn't it time for her milk?
Mana: Cheryl, if you please?
Cheryl: Sure!
Cheryl-meryl!
Mana: Huh? What's wrong?
Rikka!
Rikka: Huh? Umm... Lemme think, there's many reasons why she wouldn't want to drink her milk...
Sorry! I don't know.
Mana: No way!
Ai-chan...
{\i1}Please, don't cry...
What's this?
Raquel: A new Cure Lovie's appeared.
Let's try it out.
Raquel: Yo! Raquel-roll! {ヨー! チェケラケ! Tried to come up with an an amusing play on Raquel's name that sort of matched the Japanese one --K}
Rikka: It's night in here now.
Ai-chan: Ai!
Mana: Why did that Cure Lovie appear?
Rikka: Perhaps it materialized in response to Mana's feelings?
Raquel: Exactly!
Cure Lovies are created from the love nurtured in your heart.
Lance: ...is what Davi said.
Rikka: Geez Raquel, you should tell us important stuff like this right away.
Mana: Ah, we've gotta go.
We're counting on your continued help with Ai-chan.
Cheryl: Leave it to us.
Raquel: When she's quiet like this, she really does look like an angel.
Cheryl: We should just let her keep sleeping like this.
Lance: Someone's coming.
Cheryl: What are you doing? You're gonna wake up Ai-chan!
Ai-chan: Ai!
Cheryl: Ai-chan, shh!
Lance: Someone really is coming now.
Male Student: Is someone in here?
Ai-chan: Ai!
Cheryl: Quiet!
Ai-chan: Ai!
Cheryl: You can't just run off on your own!
Lance: Rikka, you liar. You said no one would come.
Raquel: You've got no room to talk, Lance.
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
Cheryl: Ah! She's heading inside!
Sign: Art Room
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!
Male Student: Hey, don't just change the pose all of a sudden!
Why? Why is it chasing me?!
Stop! Stop!
Ai-chan: Yay!
Teacher: And therefore...
PE Teacher: Okay, today's class is over now.
Male Students: Right.
Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!
PE Teacher: Hey, I said class is over!
Ai-chan: Ai! Ai!
Ai!
Cheryl: Ai-chan, wait!
Ai-chan: Kewpie!
{Eyecatch}