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Dialogue: 0,0:16:43.27,0:16:46.31,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Another Nakewameke showed up! {Previous: "A Nakewameke is attacking!"}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:43.27,0:16:46.31,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Another Nakewameke showed up! {Previous: "A Nakewameke is attacking!"}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:46.31,0:16:48.27,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Yeah! Miki's in danger! {I know -> Yeah --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:46.31,0:16:48.27,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Yeah! Miki's in danger! {I know -> Yeah --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:48.94,0:16:52.03,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Be that as it may... What's with the afro?{\i0} {Changed up the beginning, also made it italic as it's a thought, not spoken. それにしても、なんでアフロやねん? --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:48.94,0:16:52.03,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Even so... What's with that afro?{\i0} {Changed up the beginning, also made it italic as it's a thought, not spoken. それにしても、なんでアフロやねん? --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:52.03,0:16:53.74,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki!
Dialogue: 0,0:16:52.03,0:16:53.74,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki!
Dialogue: 0,0:16:54.07,0:16:58.08,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Open! For the love of God, open!{OPEN! SEZ ME!!!}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:54.07,0:16:58.08,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Open! For the love of God, open!{OPEN! SEZ ME!!!}

Latest revision as of 14:45, 11 January 2013

Started page with the original v2 script, then replaced it with the revised version with my edits. --Kanmuri
Edited - 11 Jan 2013 (JST) - Rika-chama

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Format: Layer, Start, End, Style, Name, MarginL, MarginR, MarginV, Effect, Text
Dialogue: 0,0:00:22.58,0:00:25.92,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Good morning, Miki! I see you're\Npushing yourself as hard as usual!
Dialogue: 0,0:00:25.92,0:00:27.63,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Good morning!
Dialogue: 0,0:00:27.63,0:00:29.42,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Take care! {Previous: "Ah, still not done?" I'm pretty sure this is a slurred きをつけてな! --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:00:29.42,0:00:30.46,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I will!{Previous: "Not yet!" Nope. --Kanmuri}{should we typeset おとうふ here? - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:02:28.75,0:02:30.29,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Morning...
Dialogue: 0,0:02:30.67,0:02:31.75,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Good morning.
Dialogue: 0,0:02:34.50,0:02:37.34,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,You know, if you eat like that every morning, you're going to get fat. {day -> morning --Kanmuri}{was "you're only going to make yourself fat" - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:02:38.17,0:02:40.22,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Don't you know, Mama?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:40.22,0:02:44.06,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Eating a proper breakfast and then a bit less for lunch and dinner... {Previously: "Having a large breakfast and a small lunch is the healthiest way to eat." --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:02:44.08,0:02:47.10,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,is the healthiest and the best way to diet. {New line, split previous one and added missing stuff -- Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:02:47.77,0:02:50.10,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,What about the way I eat?
Dialogue: 0,0:02:50.10,0:02:51.31,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Zero points. {I thought this was amusing, so I left it alone --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:03:02.36,0:03:03.20,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Good!
Dialogue: 0,0:03:10.00,0:03:12.25,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm perfect! {‾ -> ! --Kanmuri}{MKTN KNPK!!!!!!}
Dialogue: 0,0:03:15.25,0:03:20.80,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\fad(500,0)\i1}Freshly Gathered!\NCure Berry Is Born!{\i0} {Removed duplicate "fresh" per style --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:03:23.26,0:03:25.60,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Evil and misery, begone! {Make sure this section matches the final version from the revised episode 1 script. I changed it to match what's on the wiki as of this writing. -- Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:03:25.60,0:03:26.64,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Pretty Cure
Dialogue: 0,0:03:26.64,0:03:30.77,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Love Sunshine!
Dialogue: 0,0:03:31.94,0:03:34.02,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Who the heck are you?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:34.61,0:03:39.53,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,The legendary warrior... Pretty Cure.
Dialogue: 0,0:03:39.53,0:03:42.99,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Legendary warrior... Pretty Cure?
Dialogue: 0,0:03:42.99,0:03:46.83,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I won't allow you to do as you please anymore!
Dialogue: 0,0:03:46.83,0:03:49.37,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,...won't let you... as you please! {Since word order is different, direct translation doesn't really fit, so I think this is the best fit --Kanmuri}{left the leading elipsis in b/c it's one of those rare instances where it should be left in... a trailing thought that is left over from something that isn't said in this episode. - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:03:55.17,0:03:56.75,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,A-A dream?{damn... first time of many.... Love w/ her hair down ^__^}
Dialogue: 0,0:04:14.27,0:04:15.85,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Good morning! {Previously: "What's the story, morning glory?" Umm.... no. I think that's a bit over-localized there. おはようさん! is what Tarte said. Apparently it's kansai-ben for おはようございます. --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:04:24.91,0:04:27.99,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Oh, I'm still dreaming. {in a dream -> dreaming --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:04:27.99,0:04:32.08,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,In that case, if I just close my eyes...
Dialogue: 0,0:04:35.50,0:04:37.46,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,You goin' back to sleep already?
Dialogue: 0,0:04:37.46,0:04:39.92,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Ah! It's {\i1}not{\i0} a dream!
Dialogue: 0,0:04:39.92,0:04:42.05,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Why is there a ferret talking in a Kansai accent? {Previously: "Why is there a ferret and why does it have a Kansai accent-" Would prefer "dialect", as that's more correct than just accent, but I think "accent" is more accessible --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:04:42.05,0:04:45.05,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,And why is there a peculiar plushie playing over there? {Previously: "-and why is there a baby giggling and making things float and-"  And yeah, I worked for that alliteration, w --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:04:47.72,0:04:51.52,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Well, now that you're up, I guess I'd\Nbetter get on with the introductions. {Tarte is as unintelligible as ever, but this is close enough to what I *can* make out --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:04:51.52,0:04:53.39,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Up we go!{was: Alley oop! - Rika}{This goes where he's trying to get back up onto the bed --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:04:53.39,0:04:54.19,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Y-Yessir!
Dialogue: 0,0:04:54.19,0:04:57.98,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm Tarte, from the Kingdom of Sweets. {My name's -> I'm --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:04:57.98,0:05:02.74,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,The baby over there's Chiffon. Pleased to meetcha.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:02.74,0:05:05.45,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Ah, likewise. I'm Love Momozono.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:05.95,0:05:10.66,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Now, do you know what a parallel world is?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:11.20,0:05:12.66,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Parasol world?
Dialogue: 0,0:05:12.66,0:05:16.87,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Yeah, it's a world where many umbrellas need savin{\fscx250}-
Dialogue: 0,0:05:16.87,0:05:20.00,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,NO! Not "Parasol", "Parallel"! Pa-ra-llel! {( ´∀`)Σ⊂(゜Д゜ ) なんでやねん!}
Dialogue: 0,0:05:21.75,0:05:26.68,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,A parallel world refers to many worlds that exist side-by-side.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:26.68,0:05:33.18,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,To put it simply, inside one\Nworld there are many worlds.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:33.93,0:05:37.65,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Wow, I can see lots of me!
Dialogue: 0,0:05:37.65,0:05:44.90,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,So, right smack dab in the middle of all these parallel worlds, there's this one called "Labyrinth."{was: Amongst all these parallel worlds, there is one called Labyrinth. -  I took a couple of liberties... - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:05:44.90,0:05:48.68,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,The leader's name is Moebius.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:48.68,0:05:51.91,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,He's a really bad guy who wants to rule over every living being in every parallel world.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:51.91,0:05:54.25,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Man, he really rubs me the wrong way!
Dialogue: 0,0:05:54.25,0:05:59.75,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,So, I have to find the only ones who can save us:\NThe legendary soldiers, Pretty Cure.
Dialogue: 0,0:05:59.75,0:06:01.17,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Eh?!
Dialogue: 0,0:06:01.17,0:06:03.80,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I gotta go find the Pretty Cure? {Rewrote this line --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:06:03.80,0:06:06.51,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Yeah, and take Chiffon with you. {Oh -> Yeah --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:06:10.68,0:06:16.14,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,And so, I've finally found a\Nlegendary Pretty Cure warrior. {"toil and strife"? not really --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:06:16.14,0:06:19.44,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm counting on you, Cure Peach!
Dialogue: 0,0:06:20.56,0:06:22.27,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Don't fall asleep, again!{added "again" - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:06:24.11,0:06:25.48,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Love, dear?
Dialogue: 0,0:06:25.48,0:06:27.99,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I know it's Sunday, but how long are you going to sleep?
Dialogue: 0,0:06:27.99,0:06:29.91,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Oh no! It's Mom!
Dialogue: 0,0:06:29.91,0:06:31.41,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm coming in.
Dialogue: 0,0:06:32.87,0:06:36.75,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,You're already awake? You should have said something when I called.
Dialogue: 0,0:06:39.46,0:06:41.04,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Morning, Mom!
Dialogue: 0,0:06:41.04,0:06:44.46,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Didn't you say you were doing something today?
Dialogue: 0,0:06:49.30,0:06:50.97,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I completely forgot!
Dialogue: 0,0:06:51.72,0:06:53.55,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Hey Love, do you know how to dance?
Dialogue: 0,0:06:53.55,0:07:00.60,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I-I could never dance like that! I'm fine with just watching you dance!
Dialogue: 0,0:07:00.60,0:07:01.90,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}So you do know how.
Dialogue: 0,0:07:01.90,0:07:02.23,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Huh?
Dialogue: 0,0:07:02.48,0:07:04.11,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}How about I give you some dancing lessons?
Dialogue: 0,0:07:04.11,0:07:06.48,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I bet you'll get really good in no time!
Dialogue: 0,0:07:06.48,0:07:09.82,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Really?! You mean it?! Y-Yes please!
Dialogue: 0,0:07:11.66,0:07:13.28,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}It's my way of saying "thanks" for rescuing me.
Dialogue: 0,0:07:13.62,0:07:20.66,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'll invite Buki and Miki, and we can form our own dancing trio! Just like Trinity!
Dialogue: 0,0:07:22.71,0:07:23.46,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Huh?
Dialogue: 0,0:07:24.79,0:07:25.54,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Whoa!
Dialogue: 0,0:07:29.01,0:07:30.51,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Stop! Stop! Please heel!
Dialogue: 0,0:07:31.30,0:07:32.30,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Buki?
Dialogue: 0,0:07:34.43,0:07:38.35,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Hey, isn't it a little early for us to kiss? {熱烈 たい かんけい なんですけど -- Yeah, that fits. --Kanmuri}{Love sew furry. Don't worry, Love, Karen's a furry, too . So is Buki. -__^ }
Dialogue: 0,0:07:40.06,0:07:43.10,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It seems he really likes you, Love.
Dialogue: 0,0:07:43.10,0:07:46.32,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,He caught sight of you and shot off like a bolt!
Dialogue: 0,0:07:47.52,0:07:51.95,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,So, this is the dog who's being treated at your family's animal hospital?
Dialogue: 0,0:07:51.95,0:07:56.12,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Yeah. He's all better now, so he'll be released soon.
Dialogue: 0,0:07:56.12,0:08:01.37,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Oh, that's right! I was just heading over to see you.{Previously: "Ah, that's right! I've got a special invitation for you!" I don't think that's quite right. ああ、そうだ。あたしもちょうどぶきの地に行こうと思ってたんだよ。 --Kanmuri}{yes... no 招待 anywhere in that line. - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:08:01.37,0:08:03.79,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Oh really? Did you need something from me? {Previously: "Huh? An invitation for me?" --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:08:03.79,0:08:06.09,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Why don't we... dance together?
Dialogue: 0,0:08:06.09,0:08:07.29,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Dance?
Dialogue: 0,0:08:07.29,0:08:14.05,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It's amazing! Listen to this! Miyuki, the leader of Trinity, is going to teach me how to dance! {Added the "Listen to this!" In the Japanese it comes before the "It's amazing!", but it fits better in English afterward. --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:08:15.30,0:08:17.22,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,By Trinity, you mean that idol group? {Miyuki -> Trinity --Kanmuri}{TRINITYって?あのIDOLの?}
Dialogue: 0,0:08:17.22,0:08:24.40,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Yes! And you and Miki can learn with me, and we can become a dancing trio too! {*}
Dialogue: 0,0:08:24.40,0:08:26.86,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Isn't that incredible?
Dialogue: 0,0:08:26.86,0:08:28.48,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It's amazing!
Dialogue: 0,0:08:28.48,0:08:33.86,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki's already aiming to be a top fashion model.\NShe's a really talented dancer, too.
Dialogue: 0,0:08:33.86,0:08:36.32,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,She'll be an all-singing, all-dancing fashion model!
Dialogue: 0,0:08:37.62,0:08:38.58,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,But...
Dialogue: 0,0:08:38.58,0:08:39.58,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I don't think I'd be any good at that.
Dialogue: 0,0:08:39.95,0:08:41.83,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Huh? What are you talking about?
Dialogue: 0,0:08:41.83,0:08:44.25,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,You can be an all-singing, all-dancing veterinarian!
Dialogue: 0,0:08:44.25,0:08:45.29,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,You'll be awesome!
Dialogue: 0,0:08:45.92,0:08:47.29,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I...
Dialogue: 0,0:08:47.29,0:08:52.67,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm sorry. When I get in front of other people I... I just can't...
Dialogue: 0,0:08:54.09,0:08:54.93,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Oh, right...
Dialogue: 0,0:08:55.34,0:08:56.59,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm really sorry.
Dialogue: 0,0:08:56.59,0:09:00.56,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Don't worry about it! If you change your mind, just let me know!
Dialogue: 0,0:09:00.56,0:09:02.56,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,See you around! Bye bye!
Dialogue: 0,0:09:04.56,0:09:06.77,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,All right, next up is Miki!
Dialogue: 0,0:09:07.77,0:09:09.27,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Welcome!
Dialogue: 0,0:09:09.90,0:09:11.78,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Oh, it's just Love.
Dialogue: 0,0:09:11.78,0:09:14.49,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,What do you mean, "just Love"? You can be so cruel.
Dialogue: 0,0:09:14.49,0:09:17.24,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Sorry 'bout that! I was only kidding!
Dialogue: 0,0:09:17.24,0:09:19.37,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,If you're looking for Miki, she just left.
Dialogue: 0,0:09:19.37,0:09:22.20,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Huh? Guess I'll send her a text then...
Dialogue: 0,0:09:22.91,0:09:24.46,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Say, my sweet little Love-heart... --- FIX ME
Dialogue: 0,0:09:24.46,0:09:27.12,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,How'd you like to be my hair model?
Dialogue: 0,0:09:27.12,0:09:28.33,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,A hair model?
Dialogue: 0,0:09:28.33,0:09:33.21,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,A big competition is coming up, and my usual model suddenly canceled on me.
Dialogue: 0,0:09:33.21,0:09:35.63,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Ah, but I was going to do stuff today.
Dialogue: 0,0:09:35.63,0:09:38.47,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Pretty please! I'll pay you in doughnuts.{yeah, she knows how to yank Love around www}
Dialogue: 0,0:09:38.89,0:09:40.80,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,D-D-Doughnuts?!
Dialogue: 0,0:09:41.60,0:09:43.43,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'll get that happiness!
Dialogue: 0,0:10:02.37,0:10:03.24,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Here you go.
Dialogue: 0,0:10:03.24,0:10:04.29,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Thank you.
Dialogue: 0,0:10:41.24,0:10:42.74,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Welcome!
Dialogue: 0,0:10:44.79,0:10:45.83,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,A new text message?
Dialogue: 0,0:10:46.75,0:10:48.54,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It's from Love.
Dialogue: 0,0:10:48.54,0:10:53.71,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,"Miyuki from Trinity is teaching me how to dance."
Dialogue: 0,0:10:53.71,0:11:00.76,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Huh? Does she mean... THE Trinity?! How does Love know someone like that?
Dialogue: 0,0:11:01.55,0:11:03.39,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Here you go, Miki.
Dialogue: 0,0:11:04.47,0:11:05.47,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Thanks.
Dialogue: 0,0:11:05.85,0:11:12.94,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}‾ Please support the creators! Buy the DVDs! ‾{\i0}
Dialogue: 0,0:11:05.85,0:11:19.90,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\an8\i1}www.curecom.net\h\h\h\h\h\h\h\h#precure@irc.rizon.net{\i0}
Dialogue: 0,0:11:12.94,0:11:19.90,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}‾ This is a free fansub! Not for sale, rent or auction! ‾{\i0}
Dialogue: 0,0:11:30.66,0:11:34.04,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,That Pretty Cure... if she hadn't have opposed me... {Previously: "That meddling "Pretty Cure"... how dare she get in my way." --Kanmuri}{AND I'D HAVE GOTTEN AWAY WITH IT, TOO! IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOU MEDDLING KIDS.... AND YOUR FERRET!}
Dialogue: 0,0:11:35.17,0:11:38.63,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Even if it was only a little bit, you did manage to raise the Sorrow Gauge. {Previously: "But did you not gather much energy for the Revival Gauge in the process?" --Kanmuri}{orz... でも・・・ sometimes, it's okay to just leave "demo" alone. Also... >Revival Gauge.... OTL  Did we /REALLY/ do this???? FFFFFFFFFF - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:11:38.63,0:11:39.63,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Isn't that good? {Previously: "Congratulations." 良かったじゃない? Could use a bit more massaging. --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:11:40.13,0:11:43.18,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Just leave the rest to us. {Previously: "You do your job, and leave everything else to us." A bit too much "scriptwriting" there, I think --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:11:47.10,0:11:52.31,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Those who stand in my way, no matter who they are, will be shown no mercy.{Previous: "I will not allow anyone or anything to oppose me again." --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:11:54.02,0:11:56.44,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,So how are things with Papa?
Dialogue: 0,0:11:56.44,0:11:58.69,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Okay. And you?
Dialogue: 0,0:11:58.69,0:12:03.03,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Like usual. It's kinda fun living together with Mom {\fscx250}-{\r} just the two of us.{Previous: "Same old, same old. Doing this or that for Mama. It's pretty fun." --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:12:03.03,0:12:04.62,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Glad to hear.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:04.62,0:12:07.16,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Love, thanks for taking good care of Miki. {Previous: "Love, I hope you're getting along with Miki." --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:12:07.74,0:12:09.79,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,And thanks for taking good care of my hair. {Previous: "And I hope you're getting along with her too!" No, I don't think that's quite right, she's asking Reimi to よろしく her, not Miki. The lines feel like they should still mirror each other in some way, though, so that's why I set them up like that. --Kanmuri}{Yeah, a bit liberal, but I think it works - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:12:15.13,0:12:16.71,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It looks good on me!
Dialogue: 0,0:12:16.71,0:12:17.50,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Doesn't it?
Dialogue: 0,0:12:17.50,0:12:19.34,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I can feel my creative juices flowing!
Dialogue: 0,0:12:19.34,0:12:21.88,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Let's go all out!
Dialogue: 0,0:12:26.89,0:12:30.72,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Um... instead of "all out", maybe we should go "back in" a bit?
Dialogue: 0,0:12:31.14,0:12:32.77,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm going all out!
Dialogue: 0,0:12:32.77,0:12:33.89,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki?
Dialogue: 0,0:12:33.89,0:12:37.23,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm definitely going to become a fashion model!
Dialogue: 0,0:12:37.23,0:12:40.36,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I know you will. You're perfect.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:40.36,0:12:44.03,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Perfect... Well, that's something to aim for. Thank you.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:45.07,0:12:52.00,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,You've got a target that you can reach.\NHowever, I've always had a weak constitution. {"I've had a weak constitution since birth." -> "I've always had a weak constitution." The "since birth" sounds a bit akward and "translationese". --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:12:52.00,0:12:54.42,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I guess I'm a little jealous of you because of that.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:54.42,0:12:56.88,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Geez, what are you talking about?
Dialogue: 0,0:12:56.88,0:12:59.55,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Nothing will happen if you give up so easily.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:59.55,0:13:02.09,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It's bad if you don't have any dreams or goals.
Dialogue: 0,0:13:02.09,0:13:05.80,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Look, tell me one of your dreams right now.
Dialogue: 0,0:13:05.80,0:13:06.68,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Huh?
Dialogue: 0,0:13:06.68,0:13:08.97,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Come on. I know you have one.
Dialogue: 0,0:13:09.72,0:13:10.85,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Honestly...
Dialogue: 0,0:13:11.60,0:13:12.98,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I want to become a doctor!
Dialogue: 0,0:13:13.52,0:13:16.81,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,That's great! I know you can do it, Kazuki.
Dialogue: 0,0:13:16.81,0:13:19.48,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Such an "irresponsible" thing to say, Sis.{Previously: "This is a new side of you, Sis."  無責任いうね、姉さんは。Not quite sure how to mark that this is as somewhat sarcastic, so I put the "irresponsible" in quotes. --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:13:19.48,0:13:21.98,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It's important to have that kind of "irresponsible" faith. {Filling in implied information to make it clearer in English -- Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:13:23.19,0:13:25.11,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,You really {\i1}are{\i0} perfect.
Dialogue: 0,0:13:28.78,0:13:30.87,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Voila! I have created a masterpiece!
Dialogue: 0,0:13:31.70,0:13:36.04,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'll be able to get my hair back to normal after this, right?
Dialogue: 0,0:13:36.50,0:13:39.42,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Don't worry! Don't worry! It'll go back, I promise!
Dialogue: 0,0:13:39.71,0:13:41.75,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Somehow that doesn't make me feel better...
Dialogue: 0,0:13:42.05,0:13:44.21,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Ah, 'scuse me for one moment.
Dialogue: 0,0:14:03.82,0:14:05.82,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I hate all these smiling faces.{Previously: "The sight of smiling faces disgusts me..." --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:14:05.82,0:14:07.24,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,They fill me with disgust. {Previously: "Such selfishness!" 虫酸が走る。 --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:14:11.62,0:14:13.24,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Switch Over!
Dialogue: 0,0:14:14.41,0:14:16.12,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I am Eas.
Dialogue: 0,0:14:16.12,0:14:20.33,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,A servant of the supreme ruler of Labyrinth, Lord Moebius! {Fix -- Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:14:26.55,0:14:27.97,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Nakewameke!
Dialogue: 0,0:14:30.51,0:14:31.89,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Do my bidding! {Fix --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:14:36.31,0:14:39.15,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,NAKEWAMEKE!
Dialogue: 0,0:14:43.65,0:14:45.99,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,MADE FROM CONCENTRATE!
Dialogue: 0,0:14:47.49,0:14:48.40,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Argh! It's juice!
Dialogue: 0,0:14:48.40,0:14:50.99,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,No! That's impossible to wash out!
Dialogue: 0,0:14:51.78,0:14:54.41,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I hate Tomato Juice, too!{Previous: "Why did it have to be tomato juice?" --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:14:54.41,0:14:57.00,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,CALORIE ZERO!
Dialogue: 0,0:14:57.91,0:14:58.91,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Yah! Now it's cola!
Dialogue: 0,0:14:58.91,0:15:00.71,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,The bubbles are burning my eyes!
Dialogue: 0,0:15:02.42,0:15:05.09,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,More screaming! More crying!
Dialogue: 0,0:15:05.92,0:15:12.14,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Your screams shall become the\Nenergy that fills the Sorrow Gauge... {Revival -> Sorrow --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:15:12.14,0:15:14.22,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,so that we can find Infinity! {Then -> So that --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:15:17.18,0:15:18.85,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Ah! What is that?!
Dialogue: 0,0:15:21.81,0:15:23.02,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Run, Kazuki!
Dialogue: 0,0:15:27.44,0:15:28.69,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Kazuki?!
Dialogue: 0,0:15:30.61,0:15:34.45,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm sorry Miki. My condition...
Dialogue: 0,0:15:37.16,0:15:39.12,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Get away, you monster!
Dialogue: 0,0:15:41.79,0:15:44.21,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,GREAT MONSTER COIN MACHINE!
Dialogue: 0,0:15:45.09,0:15:46.38,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Hang on, Kazuki!
Dialogue: 0,0:15:55.97,0:15:59.73,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm going to get help. Just hang on, Kazuki.
Dialogue: 0,0:16:00.14,0:16:03.35,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,What th{\fscx250}-{\r} It won't budge at all!
Dialogue: 0,0:16:03.35,0:16:06.73,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Huh? What do you mean you haven't even\Ndecided on a hairstyle for the competition?!
Dialogue: 0,0:16:06.73,0:16:09.82,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,How long is she going to keep talking on the phone?
Dialogue: 0,0:16:11.45,0:16:13.91,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,No way! How could it be this late?
Dialogue: 0,0:16:13.91,0:16:16.74,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I'm going to miss Miyuki's dance lesson!
Dialogue: 0,0:16:16.74,0:16:19.41,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Oh yeah... I wonder where Miki is?
Dialogue: 0,0:16:20.41,0:16:23.71,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Ah, Miki? Did you get my text about the dance lesson?
Dialogue: 0,0:16:23.71,0:16:26.09,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Help! Help us, Love!{\i0}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:26.09,0:16:28.13,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,What's the matter, Miki? Where are you?
Dialogue: 0,0:16:28.13,0:16:31.88,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,We're in a diner! We've been\Ntrapped by a strange monster!
Dialogue: 0,0:16:31.88,0:16:33.55,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,A strange monster?
Dialogue: 0,0:16:34.30,0:16:37.05,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Could it be the work of that Eas girl?
Dialogue: 0,0:16:37.51,0:16:39.60,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Hold on, Miki! I'm on my way!
Dialogue: 0,0:16:40.64,0:16:43.27,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Ah, Peach! I've been looking everywhere for you! {Peach-han, not P-chan --Kanmuri}{Yeah, let's not get ahead of ourselves.... Suite's not for another 2 seasons, still - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:43.27,0:16:46.31,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Another Nakewameke showed up! {Previous: "A Nakewameke is attacking!"}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:46.31,0:16:48.27,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Yeah! Miki's in danger! {I know -> Yeah --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:48.94,0:16:52.03,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Even so... What's with that afro?{\i0} {Changed up the beginning, also made it italic as it's a thought, not spoken. それにしても、なんでアフロやねん? --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:16:52.03,0:16:53.74,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki!
Dialogue: 0,0:16:54.07,0:16:58.08,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Open! For the love of God, open!{OPEN! SEZ ME!!!}
Dialogue: 0,0:17:01.45,0:17:05.83,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,That's right, force the entire city to drink juice! {Previously: "More power... or in this case, more juice!" No, I don't think this was meant to be a pun, and even so it's not even close. そうだ、そのまま街中にジュースを飲みしてしまい。 --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:17:09.59,0:17:12.09,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It's no good! We're done for! {"no-one can save us" -> "we're done for" --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:17:12.09,0:17:13.26,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,We're not giving up!
Dialogue: 0,0:17:13.26,0:17:18.22,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,We both have dreams to live for!\NThat's why we can't give up hope!{was can't give up hope to the very end! So... once we perceive the end, /then/ we can give up hope? - Rika}{have to have -> can't give up --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:17:21.47,0:17:22.27,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki...
Dialogue: 0,0:17:23.48,0:17:25.77,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,It opened! Quickly, Kazuki! Get out of here!
Dialogue: 0,0:17:27.27,0:17:28.44,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,You go first!
Dialogue: 0,0:17:28.44,0:17:30.19,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Don't be stupid! What are you saying? {"wait" -> "Don't be stupid!" --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:17:30.19,0:17:31.15,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,But Sis...
Dialogue: 0,0:17:31.57,0:17:32.61,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,That's enough!
Dialogue: 0,0:17:38.41,0:17:41.74,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,My little brother can't lose his dream!\NI won't let that happen! {This sound better, Rika? And yes, I changed it back to dream instead of dreams, looking at the context again, it's probably supposed to be singular, since they talked about his dream of being a doctor earlier. -- Kanmuri}{Yup. Works for me ^__^ - Rika}
Dialogue: 0,0:18:04.77,0:18:05.81,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Change!
Dialogue: 0,0:18:05.81,0:18:07.31,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Pretty Cure...
Dialogue: 0,0:18:09.73,0:18:11.98,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Beat Up!
Dialogue: 0,0:18:35.71,0:18:38.38,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,This blue heart is the emblem of hope!
Dialogue: 0,0:18:39.64,0:18:41.01,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Freshly gathered! {Removed redundant "fresh" --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:18:41.51,0:18:43.18,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Cure Berry!{Belly}
Dialogue: 0,0:18:49.90,0:18:51.40,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Please take care of him.
Dialogue: 0,0:18:51.40,0:18:52.40,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,R-Right...
Dialogue: 0,0:18:54.07,0:18:56.11,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Wah! The second Pretty Cure! {Removed "member of" --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:18:56.11,0:18:57.61,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,That's... Miki?!
Dialogue: 0,0:18:57.99,0:18:59.66,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki!
Dialogue: 0,0:19:02.33,0:19:04.79,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,All right! Now it's my turn!
Dialogue: 0,0:19:13.75,0:19:14.88,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Change!
Dialogue: 0,0:19:15.21,0:19:16.05,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Pretty Cure...
Dialogue: 0,0:19:18.76,0:19:20.84,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Beat Up!
Dialogue: 0,0:19:42.95,0:19:45.66,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,This pink heart is the emblem of love!
Dialogue: 0,0:19:46.83,0:19:48.50,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Freshly picked! {Removed redundant "fresh" --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:19:49.12,0:19:50.83,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Cure Peach!
Dialogue: 0,0:19:52.75,0:19:53.79,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Let's!
Dialogue: 0,0:19:53.79,0:19:55.38,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Pretty Cure!
Dialogue: 0,0:19:56.63,0:19:59.30,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,What? Now there's two of them?
Dialogue: 0,0:20:02.09,0:20:04.39,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Double Pretty Cure Kick!
Dialogue: 0,0:20:31.58,0:20:33.04,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Now, Cure Berry!
Dialogue: 0,0:20:33.04,0:20:34.13,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Okay!
Dialogue: 0,0:20:35.08,0:20:37.38,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Evil and misery, begone! {Fix -- Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:20:37.67,0:20:42.88,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Pretty Cure Espoir Shower! {Joined these two lines --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:20:52.48,0:20:57.11,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Retreat, Eas. The Sorrow Gauge has risen enough.{\i0} {Revival -> Sorrow}
Dialogue: 0,0:20:57.11,0:20:58.11,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Understood.
Dialogue: 0,0:21:04.70,0:21:08.08,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,What did I just do? What just happened?
Dialogue: 0,0:21:08.08,0:21:11.75,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,There are two Pretty Cure now. With this, I can rest easy. {Removed "members of", reworded. --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:21:12.79,0:21:14.62,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki, you're a Pretty Cure!
Dialogue: 0,0:21:15.04,0:21:16.33,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Pretty Cure?
Dialogue: 0,0:21:16.33,0:21:21.51,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Uh-huh! It was a surprise to me too!\NIt all started when I went to the Trinity event...
Dialogue: 0,0:21:22.80,0:21:27.05,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I forgot about the dance lesson!\NMiyuki is going to be so worried!
Dialogue: 0,0:21:27.05,0:21:29.47,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Kazuki! I'm so glad yo{\fscx250}-
Dialogue: 0,0:21:29.47,0:21:31.02,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,We're late for the dance lesson! {Previously: "LET'S GO! NOW!"}
Dialogue: 0,0:21:31.02,0:21:33.18,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Wait a... Love!
Dialogue: 0,0:21:34.60,0:21:38.02,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Or can I? {Previously: "Maybe... we should worry a little." Follow-up to the line above about being able to "rest easy" now. --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:21:40.15,0:21:42.11,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miyuki!
Dialogue: 0,0:21:42.11,0:21:44.86,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Love! Over here!
Dialogue: 0,0:23:46.36,0:23:49.36,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Our dance lessons are really fun!
Dialogue: 0,0:23:49.36,0:23:52.07,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Miki and I are having a great time!
Dialogue: 0,0:23:52.07,0:23:54.91,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,However, Buki seems a bit down lately.
Dialogue: 0,0:23:54.91,0:23:56.70,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,I wonder what's bothering her?
Dialogue: 0,0:23:56.70,0:24:00.25,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Ah! What am I thinking about right now?! Another monster is attacking!
Dialogue: 0,0:24:00.25,0:24:03.63,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Buki... Don't tell me you {\i1}know{\i0} that monster!
Dialogue: 0,0:24:05.21,0:24:06.17,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\an8}Fresh Pretty Cure!
Dialogue: 0,0:24:05.21,0:24:09.84,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Freshly Harvested!\NCure Pine Is Born!{\i0} {Removed redundant "fresh" --Kanmuri}
Dialogue: 0,0:24:10.13,0:24:12.09,FPC Default,,0,0,0,,Let's get our happiness together! {Fixed --Kanmuri}