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Begone from before me!
Begone from before me!


Cure Ace: Wherever could you be looking, I wonder?
Cure Ace: Where were you looking at, I wonder?


Mammo: She's fast!
Mammo: She's fast!


Cure Ace: I'll settle this in one shot!
Cure Ace: I'll settle this with one blow!
Make up! Love Kiss Rouge!
Make up! Love Kiss Rouge!
I'll make your heart race!
I'll make your heart race!
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Rikka: Mana!
Rikka: Mana!


Cure Ace: Do you think crying will bring her back?
Cure Ace: You think that your tears alone can bring her back?
Come on, on your feet!
On your feet now!
This is no time to be falling down.
This is no time to be faltering.


Rikka: Hang on a second!
Rikka: Hang on a second!
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Cure Ace: The Five Precure Oaths!
Cure Ace: The Five Precure Oaths!
One of which is, "Those who are Precure always keep walking forward, their eyes on the road ahead!"{She says 一つ here, but she's not saying number one, she's saying "One of which is..." The reason why I say that is in later eps, she says 一つ again, but says a different one, meaning that she's not meaning to number them off, but just say (as I already said) that it's just one of the five oaths. --K}
One of which is, "Those who are Precure always keep going with pride and perseverance!"{She says 一つ here, but she's not saying number one, she's saying "One of which is..." The reason why I say that is in later eps, she says 一つ again, but says a different one, meaning that she's not meaning to number them off, but just say (as I already said) that it's just one of the five oaths. --K}
You need to become much stronger.
You need to become much stronger.


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King Selfishe: My poor, poor daughter...
King Selfishe: My poor, poor daughter...
Go to sleep now...  
Go to sleep now...  
A deep sleep... deeper still...
Sleep deeply, and ever so deeply...
Who in blazes is this Cure Ace?
Who in blazes is this Cure Ace?


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Mammo: Gula!
Mammo: Gula!


Ira: They must have been boring worlds where nothing better than monkeys lived.
Ira: They must have been boring worlds filled with monkeys or something.


Leva: Are you trying to tell me off?{With a kinda, "Look at him, isn't he so precious? Trying to act all big and tough..." vibe, I think. w --K}
Leva: That's quite the sweet mouth you have. {With a kinda, "Look at him, isn't he so precious? Trying to act all big and tough..." vibe, I think. w --K}


Gula: Want me to take a big bite outta your head?
Gula: Want me to take a big bite outta your head?
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Rikka: That smells {\i1}good{\i0}!
Rikka: That smells {\i1}good{\i0}!


Kentarou: Wanna try one?
Kentarou: Want a bite?


Rikka + Makoto: Thanks.
Rikka + Makoto: Thanks.
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Kentarou: Did something happen?
Kentarou: Did something happen?


Rikka: Hmm? Something?
Rikka: Hmm? What do you mean?


Kentarou: Mana's not one to mope often.
Kentarou: Mana's not one to mope often.
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Regina was snatched away, and on top of that...
Regina was snatched away, and on top of that...


Davi: Her Lovie was confiscated.
Davi: ...Her Lovie was confiscated.


Rikka: Cure Ace... I wonder exactly who she is, anyway.
Rikka: Cure Ace... I wonder exactly who she is, anyway.
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However, we haven't been able to garner any solid information.
However, we haven't been able to garner any solid information.


Lance: She's quite the worthy opponent.
Lance: She's quite the tenacious opponent.


Alice: What's this?
Alice: What's this?
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It's you and me! How's it look?{にてる? here is asking, "How well does the image I have drawn resemble what it's supposed to be?" --K}
It's you and me! How's it look?{にてる? here is asking, "How well does the image I have drawn resemble what it's supposed to be?" --K}
Look! Your randsell fits me perfectly.{I'm good with either "randoseru" or "randsell", but not "ransel" or "backpack", as randoseru has a specific connotation of the Japanese elementary school backpack. --K}
Look! Your randsell fits me perfectly.{I'm good with either "randoseru" or "randsell", but not "ransel" or "backpack", as randoseru has a specific connotation of the Japanese elementary school backpack. --K}
This pillow smells like Mana!
This pillow smells like you!


Mana: Regina...
Mana: Regina...
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I'll never forgive you for this!{Flashback to earlier in the episode --K}
I'll never forgive you for this!{Flashback to earlier in the episode --K}


Cheryl: Mana, you're gonna get sick if you don't eat something.
Cheryl: Mana, not eating anything's going to be bad for you.


Mana: I don't wanna.
Mana: I don't wanna.


Cheryl: Pull yourself together!
Cheryl: Pull yourself together!
You are one of the legendary warriors, the Precure!
You are one of the legendary Precure!


Mana: Not anymore...
Mana: Not anymore...
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<nounwrap>Mana: Ai-chan, why are you {\i1}here{\i0}?
<nounwrap>Mana: Ai-chan, why are you {\i1}here{\i0}?


Ayumi: She's your little sister, of course she's here.
Ayumi: Where else would your little sister be?


Mana: L-Little sister?!
Mana: L-Little sister?!
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Ai-chan: Ai.
Ai-chan: Ai.
Mana cheer up! Cheer up!
Mana cheer! Cheer!


Mana: Did you come to cheer me up?
Mana: Did you come to cheer me up?
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Mana: The festival certainly is bustling.
Mana: The festival certainly is bustling.
Regina'd probably be really happy to see this...
Regina'd probably be really happy to see this...
Yeah like that'd happen...
Yeah, like that'd happen...


Aguri: How long do you plan to keep sulking?
Aguri: How long do you plan to keep sulking?
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Ai-chan: Kewpie-pie!
Ai-chan: Kewpie-pie!


Aguri: Somewhere along the way, you lost that which was most precious to you, Aida Mana-san.
Aguri: You'll lose the thing you hold most dear if you stay like this, Aida Mana-san.


Male Fans: Can we have your autograph, please?
Male Fans: Can we have your autograph, please?
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Leva: There's no need to hold back...
Leva: There's no need to hold back...
We're gonna grant your wish.
We're gonna help your desires come true.


Gula: Rampage, and unleash the darkness within your heart!  
Gula: Rampage, and unleash the darkness within your heart!  
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Rosetta + Sword: Yeah.
Rosetta + Sword: Yeah.


Leva: Oh, you're here fast.
Leva: Oh, aren't you quick to the party!


Cure Sword: Who are you?!
Cure Sword: Who are you?!
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Mana: My head's been so full since Regina left that I was unable to see what was important.
Mana: My head's been so full since Regina left that I was unable to see what was important.
But, I'm no longer at a loss as to what's most important.
It's not about what's the most important.
I want to protect everyone's happiness!
I just want to protect everyone's happiness!
The smiling faces of my comrades, of Regina, I'll protect them all!
The smiling faces of my comrades, of Regina, I'll protect them all!


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Shikishi Selfishe: Self?
Shikishi Selfishe: Self?


Leva: You're going to try again?
Leva: You still hanging in there?


Cure Sword: There's no way we're giving up!
Cure Sword: There's no way we're giving up!
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One of which is...
One of which is...


Mana: "Those who are Precure always keep walking forward, their eyes on the road ahead!"
Mana: "Those who are Precure always keep going with pride and perseverance!"


Cure Diamond: No way, she's...
Cure Diamond: Don't tell me...


Aguri: It seems you've recovered your love.
Aguri: It seems you've recovered your love.
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Cure Love: Abundant love, Cure Heart!
Cure Love: Abundant love, Cure Heart!


Cure Heart: Poor, sad, and lovelorn autograph materials...
Cure Heart: Poor, sad, and lovelorn stationery...
I, Cure Heart, will make your heart beat with love again!
I, Cure Heart, will make your heart beat with love again!


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Self!
Self!


Cure Ace: Nice work.
Cure Ace: You ready?


Cure Heart: You too.
Cure Heart: You bet!


Cure Ace: Make up! Love Kiss Rouge!
Cure Ace: Make up! Love Kiss Rouge!
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Cure Diamond: Cure Heart!
Cure Diamond: Cure Heart!
Thank goodness, I'm truly grateful.
Thank goodness, I'm so glad!


Cure Heart: Sorry to worry you...
Cure Heart: Sorry to worry you...
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Cure Sword: It's fine, we're just glad your back to your normal cheerful self...
Cure Sword: It's fine, we're just glad your back to your normal cheerful self...


Cure Rosetta: Indeed, truly.
Cure Rosetta: Indeed.


Cure Ace: This is no time to be celebrating.
Cure Ace: This is no time to be celebrating.
Your ordeal has only just begun.
Your ordeal has only just begun.
You need to quickly ascend to my same stage.
You will need to quickly ascend to the stage I am on.
I'll be waiting for you. Adieu!
I'll be waiting for you. Adieu!



Latest revision as of 23:13, 8 July 2015

Translation: Kanmuri

TL complete, ready for timing

Translation

Prologue

Regina: Who are you?!

Cure Ace: Love's trump card, Cure Ace!

{OP}

Part 1

Title: Bring Back the Love! The Five Precure Oaths!

Rikka: Cure... Ace?

Davi: A warrior I've never seen before!

Regina: {\i1}What's with her?{\i0}
{\i1}Just looking at her makes me queasy.{\i0}
Begone from before me!

Cure Ace: Where were you looking at, I wonder?

Mammo: She's fast!

Cure Ace: I'll settle this with one blow!
Make up! Love Kiss Rouge!
I'll make your heart race!
Ace Shot!
Bang!

Mana: Regina!
Regina!
Regina!

Bel: Cure Ace, you said?
I'll remember that name...

Mana: Wait!
Don't take Regina!
Regina...

Regina: Precure...
I'll never forgive you for this!
Precure!

Mana: Regina!

Rikka: Mana!

Cure Ace: You think that your tears alone can bring her back?
On your feet now!
This is no time to be faltering.

Rikka: Hang on a second!

Makoto: You don't understand!
You don't know how much Mana cares for Regina!

Alice: I don't know who you are or where you came from, but I won't permit such an offhand dismissal of Mana's feelings!

Cure Ace: The Five Precure Oaths!
One of which is, "Those who are Precure always keep going with pride and perseverance!"{She says 一つ here, but she's not saying number one, she's saying "One of which is..." The reason why I say that is in later eps, she says 一つ again, but says a different one, meaning that she's not meaning to number them off, but just say (as I already said) that it's just one of the five oaths. --K}
You need to become much stronger.

Mana: I can't...
I can't get any stronger than this...

Cure Ace: I have no choice then.{"You are hereby relieved of command." ;_; --K}
I will hang on to this until you have recovered your love.
Okay? Adieu!

Rikka: W-Wait!

Davi: She's gone...

Mana: I'm sorry, guys...
It's just like she said.
I'm not qualified to be a Precure.

Alice: Mana-chan...

Rikka: It's not your fault!
So please stop crying!

King Selfishe: My poor, poor daughter...
Go to sleep now...
Sleep deeply, and ever so deeply...
Who in blazes is this Cure Ace?

Bel: We do not know.
However, she {\i1}is{\i0} a fearsome opponent.

Leva: Seems like she's more than you can handle, Bel-chan!

Bel: Stop calling me that, Leva!
You guys haven't captured a single world yet, have you?

Gula: We've already wiped out three whole worlds!

Mammo: Gula!

Ira: They must have been boring worlds filled with monkeys or something.

Leva: That's quite the sweet mouth you have. {With a kinda, "Look at him, isn't he so precious? Trying to act all big and tough..." vibe, I think. w --K}

Gula: Want me to take a big bite outta your head?

Ira: Try it if you can!

King Selfishe: Cut it out!
Leva and Gula!
I'm counting on you to exterminate the Precure!

Leva + Gula: Yes sir!

Sign: Ohgai Shopping District Festival

Rikka + Makoto: Hello!

Kentarou + Ayumi: Welcome!

Rikka: That smells {\i1}good{\i0}!

Kentarou: Want a bite?

Rikka + Makoto: Thanks.

Makoto: Umm, how's Mana?

Ayumi: She's been holed up in her room since yesterday, and hasn't eaten a bite.

Makoto: I see...

Kentarou: Did something happen?

Rikka: Hmm? What do you mean?

Kentarou: Mana's not one to mope often.
I'm thinking she probably had a fight with Regina or something.

Rikka: It wasn't exactly a "fight", per se.

Kentarou: Huh?

Makoto: It'll be okay.
Mana's going through some hard times right now, but I'm sure she'll be back to her cheerful self in no time.

Kentarou: That's true.
Mana has some really good friends.

Makoto: Mana's probably depressed.

Raquel: That's not hard to believe.
Regina was snatched away, and on top of that...

Davi: ...Her Lovie was confiscated.

Rikka: Cure Ace... I wonder exactly who she is, anyway.

Alice: About that...

Sebastian: Since she appeared, we've been probing into the whereabouts of Cure Ace.
However, we haven't been able to garner any solid information.

Lance: She's quite the tenacious opponent.

Alice: What's this?
It's Mana-chan's grandfather.

Rikka + Alice + Makoto: Hello!

Grandfather: Oh, hello.

Rikka: What's up with those boxes?

Grandfather: There's a flea market at the festival.
Mana promised to help out, but...

Rikka: We'd love to help out, if that's okay.

Grandfather: Really?

Alice: Of course!

Makoto: Um... I'll help out, too.
Welcome!

Red shirt girl: I'll take this, Makopi!

Makoto: 100 yen please.

Light green shirt girl: We're rooting for you!

Yellow shirt boy: Keep up the good work!

Makoto: Thank you.

Rikka: Aren't they kind of missing the point?

Alice: I see no problem, as it's attracting a lively crowd.

Grandpa: That's right, things get lively when people gather together.
And a lively town is a happy town.

Alice: We should do our best to liven things up in Mana's place.

Rikka: You're right.

Regina: Mana... Mana!
It's you and me! How's it look?{にてる? here is asking, "How well does the image I have drawn resemble what it's supposed to be?" --K}
Look! Your randsell fits me perfectly.{I'm good with either "randoseru" or "randsell", but not "ransel" or "backpack", as randoseru has a specific connotation of the Japanese elementary school backpack. --K}
This pillow smells like you!

Mana: Regina...

Regina: Precure...
I'll never forgive you for this!{Flashback to earlier in the episode --K}

Cheryl: Mana, not eating anything's going to be bad for you.

Mana: I don't wanna.

Cheryl: Pull yourself together!
You are one of the legendary Precure!

Mana: Not anymore...

Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!

Mana: Wh-What?!
What was that just now?
Yes?

Ayumi: It's kinda busy in the kitchen, so can you watch Ai-chan for a bit?{表 meaning "the back", but "the back" of a restaurant is the kitchen, so that's why I TLed it as such. --K}

Ai-chan: Kewpie!

Mana: Whaaaaa-?

{Eyecatch}

Part 2

Mana: Ai-chan, why are you {\i1}here{\i0}?

Ayumi: Where else would your little sister be?

Mana: L-Little sister?!

Ayumi: Okay, thanks.

Cheryl: What's going on?

Mana: Well... that magic from earlier probably planted the idea in her head that she's my little sister.

Cheryl: Whaaa-?

Ai-chan: Mana...

Mana: Hmm? Ai-chan, did you just say my name?

Ai-chan: Ai-chan, Mana, togedder!{Trying to imitate the baby talk here with "togedder". --K}

Mana: Ai-chan!

Ai-chan: Yah!

Mana: Hmm?
A Care Lovie?
You want me to use this?

Ai-chan: Ai.
Mana cheer! Cheer!

Mana: Did you come to cheer me up?

Ai-chan: Ai!

Mana: Ai-chan!
You're taking care of {\i1}me{\10}.
Thank you, Ai-chan.

Mana: The festival certainly is bustling.
Regina'd probably be really happy to see this...
Yeah, like that'd happen...

Aguri: How long do you plan to keep sulking?

Ai-chan: Kewpie!

Mana: Ah! Ai-chan, wait!

Ai-chan: Kewpie-pie!

Aguri: You'll lose the thing you hold most dear if you stay like this, Aida Mana-san.

Male Fans: Can we have your autograph, please?

DB: Sorry, but today's not an official appearance, so no autographs.

Male Fans: Aw, man...

Shorter Male Fan: Oh well.

Taller Male Fan: At least we got to see Makopi in person.

Leva: There's no need to hold back...
We're gonna help your desires come true.

Gula: Rampage, and unleash the darkness within your heart!

Selfishe: Selfishe!

Marker Selfishe: Give us...

Shikishi Selfishe: Your autograph!{I switched these two lines around because it's more natural in English --K}

Sebastian: Everyone evacuate!

Makoto: Let's go, girls!

3 Girls: Precure Love Link!

3 Mascots: L O V E

Cure Diamond: We'll do what we can in her place, since Mana can't transform.

Rosetta + Sword: Yeah.

Leva: Oh, aren't you quick to the party!

Cure Sword: Who are you?!

Leva: I'm Leva.

Gula: I'm Gula.

Leva: Pleased to make your acquaintance.

Gula: I'll gobble you up if you're not watching.

Shikishi Selfishe: Give us...

Marker Selfishe: Your autograph!

Selfishe: Self self self...

Mana: You're...

Cheryl: Mana, there's a dark heartbeat!

Sword: Sparkle Sword has no effect!

Selfishe: Self self self...

Leva: It's time to end this...{Said over top of the previous line --K}

Mana: Let's go find the others, Cheryl.

Cheryl: But you can't transform!

Mana: I'm still going.
Thank you very much.

Aguri: Huh?

Mana: My head's been so full since Regina left that I was unable to see what was important.
It's not about what's the most important.
I just want to protect everyone's happiness!
The smiling faces of my comrades, of Regina, I'll protect them all!

Ai-chan: Kewpie!

Marker Selfishe: Give us...

Shikishi Selfishe: Your autograph!
Self self self...

Leva: You've made quite a nice fish print, or rather, Cure print.{魚拓 -- From some light research, gyotaku seems to be a loanword used in the art community for these prints. However, our audience likely don't have that kind of background, and using it as a loanword instead of translating it wouldn't lend itself to the pun Leva's making, so it was translated as "fish print". --K}

Shikishi Selfishe: Self?

Leva: You still hanging in there?

Cure Sword: There's no way we're giving up!

Cure Rosetta: We'll put in Mana's share too of protecting this town!

Cure Diamond: And everyone's happiness! {Yes, there's an "And" at the beginning of the sentence, that's because it's really a continuation of Rosetta's sentence. The verb "protect" in Rosetta's line above is actually implied in hers and stated in Rikka's. People completing each others sentences is annoying to TL, w. --K}

Leva: How dull...

Marker Selfishe: Selfishe!
Self!

Mana: HOLD ON JUST A MINUTE!{Yes, CAPS because Mana is yelling so hard that the force of her voice knocks the selfishe back, w. --K}

Cure Diamond: Mana!

Cure Rosetta: You shouldn't have come!

Cure Sword: You can't transform!

Mana: I'm not running away any longer!
I will fight to protect those dear to me!

Marker Selfishe: Selfishe!

Mana: Is that all you've got?!

Shikishi Selfishe:{Sputters}What're you doing?!

Marker Selfishe: What's your deal?

Shikishi Selfishe: You want a piece of me?!

Marker Selfishe: Bring it on!

Mana: Hah!

Cure Diamond: Nice work!

Cure Rosetta: Amazing as usual, Mana-chan.

Ai-chan: Ai!

Cure Sword: Mana...

Aguri: Well done, Aida Mana.
Or rather, Cure Heart!
The Five Precure Oaths!
One of which is...

Mana: "Those who are Precure always keep going with pride and perseverance!"

Cure Diamond: Don't tell me...

Aguri: It seems you've recovered your love.
Now, let's fight together!

Mana: Yeah!

Cheryl: Cheryl!

Mana: Precure Love Link!

Cheryl: L O V E

Cure Love: Abundant love, Cure Heart!

Cure Heart: Poor, sad, and lovelorn stationery...
I, Cure Heart, will make your heart beat with love again!

Cure Diamond: Cure Heart!

Leva: Make her face as black as the others'!

Aguri: Can you really do that, I wonder?

Selfishe: Self?

Aguri: Let's go, Ai-chan!

Ai-chan: Kewpie!

Aguri: Precure Dress Up!

Ai-chan: Kewpietwump!

Cure Ace: Love's trump card, Cure Ace!
Beauty is the testament of justice.
I'll shoot straight through your heart with a single wink!

Cure Diamond: Whaaa-!?

Cure Ace: Let's go!

Cure Heart: Right!

Shikishi Selfishe: Give us...

Marker Selfishe: Your autograph! Your autograph!
Self?
Self... Self!
Self!

Cure Ace: You ready?

Cure Heart: You bet!

Cure Ace: Make up! Love Kiss Rouge!
I'll make your heart race!
Ace Shot!
Bang!

Shikishi Selfishe: Love! Love Loooooove!

Cure Heart: Precure Heart Shoot!

Marker Selfishe: Love! Love Loooooove!

Male Fans: Huh?

Gula: Cure Ace...

Leva: We won't go so easy on you next time.

Cure Diamond: Cure Heart!
Thank goodness, I'm so glad!

Cure Heart: Sorry to worry you...

Cure Sword: It's fine, we're just glad your back to your normal cheerful self...

Cure Rosetta: Indeed.

Cure Ace: This is no time to be celebrating.
Your ordeal has only just begun.
You will need to quickly ascend to the stage I am on.
I'll be waiting for you. Adieu!

Cure Heart: Cure Ace...

Cure Rosetta: Who on Earth is she?

{ED}

Preview

Makoto: I'm going to retire from being an idol.
I just can't handle singing anymore.{I heard だから、もう歌もたまんない。 Where たまんない is a slang form of たまらない, meaning "intolerable" or "unbearable". --K}

Mana: You can't quit singing, Makopi!
Okay! Starting Operation: Make Her Want to Sing Again!

Alice: I'm sure a full orchestra will work wonderfully.

Rikka: That'll just make it harder for her to sing.

Mana: Well then, if the Princess asks her to, I'm sure she'll sing.

Rikka: Huh? The Princess? What are you planning?

{\i1}DokiDoki! Precure:{\i0}

Next episode title: A Shock! Makopi's Idol Retirement Announcement!

Mana: Be still my beating heart!